Wednesday, 4 December 2013

Feedback on First Completed Draft of Origin Magazine

Yesterday I showed the class (my audience) my first draft of Origin magazine.

People said for the
 Front Cover - the main cover line needs a brighter outline to stand out against the image and move down "sneak peak" cover line slightly down and include the price.

Contents Page - add more contents such as listings to features and add page numbers.

Double Page Spread - main image has been stretched so I should place it again, I should also add page numbers and to not centre the pull quote.

Overall there was a lot of positive feedback. The images and layout were praised and of a high standard.

I will take into consideration of what they said and improve the magazine.

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